i used 2 kno sth i used 2 laugh
life used 2 make sence but now its crap
i cant find myself am tired from the facts
the only thing for me is that
its all gone no more fun
no more laughing no more games
its all gone i cant run
i can do nth 2 erase my sins
no forgivness no love.. just hate
no more prettyness life have.. no taste
no more sadness no more hateless
well thats wat.. u say
wake up 2 madness 2 mindless.. 2 see my heartless
just nth 2 find myself
just nth is making sence
i've lost myself
since i've been this
without u am selfless, heartless, & mindless
fighting for this i cant win this
gd bye myself am titred of this
gd bye myself gd bye myself gd by myself
7 comments:
hey.. ur acctually pretty good.. keep it up
did you write that !!!!
if yes then dude you're talented , am not saying that it's good , but it can be if you worked on it , but i loved it
Hey there man,
First time at your blog, and it looks very interesting!
Your poems sound great, but they're really dark and sad, why is that so? You're young and you should be happy and free, so live each day to the max ;-).
Think of it this way, most famous people and celebrities went through a lot of trouble and heartaches until they've reached what they wanted and became stars. So don't let anything and anybody hold you down ;-).
Keep up the good work and the amazing poetry!
Farah, nicely done! I echo Pheras' concern, that one so young should be so melancholy. But, very perceptive to put the "Eye of God' constellation up with the post...look up to Him and find some of the joy your name implies, young one.
r u sure u r only 14 ??
why i feel sadness in ur words? ur name Farah also :)
wala ya7eq lesha3er ma la ya7eq le3'ayrehe :P
heyy thx every1 i really appreciate wat u all say :D & there r happy timez & bad timez.. still im just a teenager i write wat i feel :D thx again
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